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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-03-30 10:02 AM

Her tears of blood
Water the ground from which she stands
Coming like a flood
Her emotions sift and shake like sand

Flowers slowly bloom in her field of hope
Raining tears begain a new era in her story
This pain she feels is beginning to cope
Slowly drifting from reality and all its glory

Slowly she drifts away from it all
like floating in the tides
she's quietly fading no matter how many times you call.
the gap betwen u two is so wide.

Slowly she fades away from you
Nothing you can do..
Reach for her hand, you do
Lifelessly she fades so do you.

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-03-30 04:00 PM

omg this was so deep and beautiful i love it.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

2 posted 2008-03-30 04:31 PM

Amazing and it's definatly going in my library. Great write!

TJ

So cut me into pieces and tape me into something beautiful...

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-03-30 06:24 PM

hey hey,
one of ur best! loooved it<3
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-03-31 12:05 PM

Great write (library as well)

JJ

GothicCherry
Member

since 2008-09-16

Posts 471
TN

5 posted 2008-09-24 02:51 PM

Whoa! I have spent my entire day of ISS reading your poetry but this is my favorite so far...

Just.Another.Falling.Star
Member

since 2008-05-08

Posts 422
Canada

6 posted 2008-09-24 08:06 PM

zach this is amazing. i absolutly loved it...its incredible. great write...library.

~*Julianna*~

"You don't know me...but I know you. That's all that matters right now... Mr.Rainey!" - Secret Window

BeyaK
Member

since 2008-08-07

Posts 126
Philippines

7 posted 2008-09-29 03:53 AM

wow, this is great... nice one... library for me as well:-)

~~*K. B.*~~

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