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rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

0 posted 2008-03-30 07:09 AM

Maybe...
We were not meant to be,
A lot of things you cannot see,
You don`t know how I feel, And Try for once
in your life to be real.
Don`t play now that you`re hurt,
Don`t fly so high, come to the Eart.

I don`t...
Turn to you, if you go,
Better do it, I don`t need you so.
My tears will not fall down,
it`s not just me, look around...
leave now, I will not be alone,
But I`ve turned back
And you were gone...

But why?
I was cold and said goodbye,
Now I know, I wanted to try.
It`s not matter I love you or not,
I know is late, but I`ve cried a lot.
Now I know, your words were true,
And all I want is only You...

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-03-30 11:04 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! great write too

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-30 02:52 PM

awee such a great poem

... it was beautifully written.. and I know how you feel.
Welcoem To Passions

Krysti

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

3 posted 2008-03-30 06:14 PM

hey hey,
great first post, and welcome to pip! i really enjoyed this poem... it was unique. i like your writing style. thanx fer the read.
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-03-31 01:41 AM

I know that feeling. great write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

5 posted 2008-03-31 01:36 PM

welcome to pip. great write. hopeing to see more from you!

JJ

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

6 posted 2008-03-31 02:31 PM

thats an amazing right

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

7 posted 2008-03-31 03:24 PM

Nice write, welcome to passions

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

8 posted 2008-03-31 08:36 PM

Great write! It sits so will and i deffenitly know how you feel to. exspecially this.

But why?
I was cold and said goodbye,
Now I know, I wanted to try.
It`s not matter I love you or not,
I know is late, but I`ve cried a lot.
Now I know, your words were true,
And all I want is only You...

i love that stanza!

and welcome to pip cant wait to see more!

jwack741
New Member

since 2008-03-31

Posts 7

9 posted 2008-03-31 10:23 PM

that was tight

imsimplyme
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 16
California

10 posted 2008-04-01 12:25 PM

Wow that was really good, i liked the way you ended it

rockangel_gv
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 43

11 posted 2008-04-01 05:16 PM

Thanks

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