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young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

0 posted 2008-03-30 12:27 PM

There's an easy lie
slipping through my breath,
weaving a comforting blanket
around my ears and yours.
Be thankful
and less than cautious
or cautious and
less
than thankful.
What's the difference really
when we cover our nakedness with
lies.

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

1 posted 2008-03-30 03:27 AM

Hey Young_Blood, it's been a while, hasn't it? How've you been? Anyways, let's get down to business.

The "messages" that I got out of reading this was that: 1. Be cautious what you wish for and 2. People are all the same. But that's just my opinion.

It was cool reading one of your poems again. They always drive me nuts, but I get a kind of thrill out of reading them. Sorry for this messy ramble/rant. I blame midnight madness.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-30 06:08 AM

Alex!!! good to have another poem from you

as always great write mind blowing and all that jazz:P
Krysti

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

3 posted 2008-03-30 09:55 AM

Wow it has been awhile since your last post. How ya' doing? this is a really great poem!! its great to hear from you again

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

4 posted 2008-03-30 10:50 AM

OMG Your Back.. BOUT TIME lol... OMG Your My fav poet on here.. u always write some of the most amazing stuff infact your prob one of the best writers i have read... I envy your talent, envy your way with words.. love everything about your work, love everything about you...

I crave your work, so please post again soon...

crimsonXnails
Member

since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

5 posted 2008-03-30 06:10 PM

hey hey,
great to c ya back! love the write!
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

6 posted 2008-03-31 03:14 AM

why thank you all for reading. you guys are too kind to me. really. i'm sorry that i'm not around more, but my schedule doesn't permit too much time for fun.

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

7 posted 2008-03-31 01:34 PM

Nice!!

JJ

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

8 posted 2008-03-31 06:43 PM

Brilliant, Absolutly Brilliant!!!
I suppose we are somtimes thankful for lies. Ignorence is bliss and all that but I'd prefer if we all showed the truth.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

9 posted 2008-04-02 11:42 AM

I really like this it has a certain vibe i guess you can say...good write

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

young_blood
Senior Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 1115
Indianapolis, IN

10 posted 2008-04-02 01:52 PM

thanks

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

11 posted 2008-04-04 03:33 AM

Ahh I noe that feeling all too well... no time.. it sux...

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