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Teen Poetry #8

never been looked at right

Katarina
Junior Member

since 2008-03-10

Posts 15
AUSTRALIA, N.S.W

0 posted 2008-03-29 07:04 PM

some people look at me
like im some kind of freak
but they dont know the full story
how it was before
how i've had to say 'bye'
to loved ones before
i've been around the world and back before
i've senn how it is
and seen what theres nothing more
they've lived in a circle
and i've lived much more

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

1 posted 2008-03-29 07:09 PM

this was really good but u left me hanging. write more!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

xbrokenxlullabyx
Junior Member

since 2007-12-25

Posts 36
NJ, U.S.A.

2 posted 2008-03-29 08:22 PM

I disagree, I liked the ending especially. It shows growth and how much you've gone through. I love poetry that ends on that type of "punch"

great write

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-03-29 10:27 PM

great write!!library

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