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stop being so dang fake
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stop being so dang fake |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
no one will understand this on here so dont ask jsut critique and i know its not that good but comment n e way why do you have to be so fake im getting really sick of playing these games you say wanna earn back my trust but you lied when i asked you straight up today i was this close to being so proud of you going back to your old ways, turning from the crowd but i was double checking, proving that its true and i just discovered that you changed cuz you knew you wont understand what im speaking of but i believe my dreams and i asked you if it was true and you flat out lied to me you underestimate my abilities questions my brains but every time i find you out and youre always the same i know what you want but yo aint gunna get it not if you keep doing this and playin like the skater chic i dont go that way im not into porn im not into those who are so i guess your heart will remain torn fix it or dont bother cuz like i said before i dont like to play these games so stop being so dang fake! only a vampire can love you forever. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
great write i love this so so so much !!!! (library) JJ |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
btw yourr feellings are really shown through this poem and its really great JJ |
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rebelangelv Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538usa |
thanks!!! and yes they were showing thru this but yea.. only a vampire can love you forever. |
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