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rebelangelv
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since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2008-03-28 09:04 PM


no one will understand this on here so dont ask jsut critique and i know its not that good but comment n e way


why do you have to be so fake
im getting really sick of playing these games
you say wanna earn back my trust
but you lied when i asked you straight up
today i was this close to being so proud
of you going back to your old ways, turning from the crowd
but i was double checking, proving that its true
and i just discovered that you changed cuz you knew
you wont understand what im speaking of
but i believe my dreams
and i asked you if it was true
and you flat out lied to me
you underestimate my abilities
questions my brains
but every time i find you out
and youre always the same
i know what you want
but yo aint gunna get it
not if you keep doing this
and playin like the skater chic
i dont go that way
im not into porn
im not into those who are
so i guess your heart will remain torn
fix it or dont bother
cuz like i said before
i dont like to play these games
so stop being so dang fake!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

© Copyright 2008 leah nelson - All Rights Reserved
hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
1 posted 2008-03-29 12:02 PM


great write i love this so so so much !!!! (library)

JJ

hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
2 posted 2008-03-29 12:04 PM


btw yourr feellings are really shown through this poem and its really great

JJ

rebelangelv
Senior Member
since 2007-05-28
Posts 538
usa
3 posted 2008-03-29 01:07 AM


thanks!!! and yes they were showing thru this but yea..

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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