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StolenDreams
Junior Member

since 2008-01-22

Posts 11
Virginia, USA

0 posted 2008-03-25 01:30 AM

I need an escape from this reality;
From all of this hate and brutality;
After all is said and done I want to bleed;
Cause its the only thing that makes me feel freed;
And I can't handle being imprisoned;
The feeling that my heart is always fissioned;
Between the idea that I am still broken;
And that stupid one about croakin;

Can you hear the music playing;
Every word the singer is saying;
Can you feel how strongly it affects you;
How strange the things it makes you do;

The strength of this addiction is unnerving;
Its evil power im stuck serving;
I can't seem to live without chaos or pain;
Having problems fall over me just like rain;
I need to be wrapped in a blanket of hate;
To feel like i could never control my fate;
No one around me could ever be safe;
Especially when my sanity and problems chafe;

Can you hear the beautiful sound;
How it takes you to a happier ground;
Can you hear the sweet lullaby;
Listening closely is something you ought to try;

I can feel myself going under tonight;
Feels like im consistently losing this fight;
I've been out of energy, I feel dead;
My hope, my strength it's all in the red;
Everything I've tried has always gone wrong;
Everytime I listen to that damnable song;
It stings the entirety of my black heart;
And plagues my brain in every part;

Listen close to every word;
To all the parts you've already heard;
Can you see how well it fits to me;
Is there any reason it took so long to see;

I just can't wait to get outta here;
And as far as I'm concerned the time is near;
It's time to pack up and get out;
Time to move on and forget all about;
These stupid and trivial problems of mine;
And all of the times where i feel like im on an incline;
Im off to a place where feet cant touch;
My disappearance wont matter that much.

[This message has been edited by StolenDreams (03-25-2008 02:04 AM).]

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

1 posted 2008-03-25 01:33 AM

oh my god this poem was amazing. wow wow. Ive felt like that like my hole life, but just give it time things will change trsut me

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2008-03-25 03:45 AM

oh Jesse what a great poem. We all feel that way. Sometimes.. just wanna get away. But those awful moments seem so little compared to the rest of your life. one day you'll think back and remember those times.. hopefully they arent really horrible cos then I just made myself look reall stoopis haha I hope things work out for you hunn. if you ever need to talk/vebt feel free to email me
Best Wishes
Krysti

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2008-03-25 11:08 AM

wow this was amazing, awsome write!

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

4 posted 2008-03-25 03:23 PM

yea i gotta agree with everyone else. awesome poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-03-25 03:34 PM

amazing poem!! great work!!

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

6 posted 2008-04-03 11:58 PM

i hate to disillusion you...but your disappearance would matter a great deal...

becca

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

7 posted 2008-04-04 12:19 PM

great write. but everyone maters. you would be missed

JJ

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