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Teen Poetry #8

A couple breaking up

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

0 posted 2008-03-24 12:36 PM

Excuses

Your "sorry" is a lie.
Your begging's the same.
You deserve to die.
You deserve the blame.

I'm sorry. I'll stop.
I'll really try to change.
I can do it.
It's not hard to arrange.

You cheated. You lied.
You think it's okay?
Leave. Now.
I want you gone in a day.

I... But what about us?
I still love you. And...
I think you still love me.
I'm sorry, but I can't understand.

Oh my god.
I must be dreaming.
There's nothing left to say.
Good-bye. You're leaving.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-24 02:29 AM

ohh andrew hunn, nobody deserves to die. very sad poem. great flow though.
Krysti

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-03-24 08:50 AM

awe this is really sad.

XxZachXx

"What did you think I ment?"

haha yes im sort of crazy deep down inside. lol!!

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

3 posted 2008-03-24 04:48 PM

sounds like a convo i had a while ago. good poem

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

Assassin_of_Verse
Member

since 2007-10-23

Posts 330
that So Cal

4 posted 2008-03-24 06:42 PM

I decided to write this when I saw a couple fighting. I got home and thought, "what were they fighting about?" So I waited and that's what I came up with.
You'll find that some of my poems do not stem from my personal life.
Thanks for the comments!

Dawn gives birth to a new day.
Dusk lays it to rest.

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