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Teen Poetry #8

One True Fear

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-03-18 10:51 PM

Lying on the cold stone floor
The voices, the screaming
You’re Alone

Alone

Alone

The words whispering in my head
Over and over again

My greatest fear has overtaken me
It has enveloped me in its’ grasp

My mind starts to believe those words
I am Alone

Alone

Alone

I guess it’s really true
You can never hide from your one
True
Fear

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

Amic
Junior Member

since 2008-02-17

Posts 39
...I think Im lost again...

1 posted 2008-03-19 01:45 PM

This is really good and it is sadly true.

Good write!

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-03-19 04:03 PM

very nice

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-03-19 07:53 PM

hmmm...u know hun, im still here. And im not leaving u, im not gonna abandon u.
I Love u my little poop blossom, and like I always say, no matter what.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

4 posted 2008-03-19 10:37 PM

Wow this was such a great poem and it's true you can not always hide from your fears, nice job

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

5 posted 2008-03-24 05:27 PM

Thanx for all the comments guys. You can never truly hide from your fears. Sometime, somehow, they all come back to slap you in the face when you're least expecting it.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

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