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Teen Poetry #8

What can i do?

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-18 09:11 PM

She says she loves him
but she doesn't want to

its just the way he says things
and the way he makes her feel
by the way he appreaciates her

i know he is trouble
but what can i do
i can't change the way she feels
whats the point in
even trying to

i am scared for her
what will she do
will she run and hide the feeling
or will she keep it
and see if he loves her too

maybe he is not so bad
and my other friends lied about him

but i really dont think
thats the truth

but what can i do
its not my life to change
i will just have to
wait and pray

[This message has been edited by hiddensmiles (03-19-2008 12:06 AM).]

masksrlife
Member

since 2008-03-26

Posts 109
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-27 06:38 PM

Hey, awesome poem its funny how thats so close to my life to! And you know who im talking about probley. Well any way i love the flow and the meaning... ok cyaz
*desaster*

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

2 posted 2008-04-07 12:46 PM

thank you its funny haha i think you caught me

Seoulair
Senior Member

since 2008-03-27

Posts 807
Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-07 01:13 AM

very good and very good life philosophy.
enjoyed the read.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-04-07 07:58 AM

wow thats how i feel at this moment. great write!!

~Zach~

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

5 posted 2008-04-10 11:13 AM

nice write

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