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Teen Poetry #8

I am

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

0 posted 2008-03-18 08:33 PM

I am the moon
your bright smile
makes me glow
and i reflect true
beauty

I am the sun
when my heart
burns to hear your voice
and just to be with you

I am the wind
as i think of you
with nothing else
blowing in my mind

I am a flower
when you take my hand
and stare at me
like nothing else matters

you make me feel
beautiful
and i love that about you

shattered-smiles
Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

1 posted 2008-03-18 10:14 PM

I like this write a lot. It has great description and flow. I admit, everyone, especially girls, wait for the chance to feel like this. It's amazing when you do feel as beautiful as this. It truly is. Anyway, library for this one.

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2008-03-19 04:11 PM

nice write

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-03-22 04:58 PM

thank you

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

4 posted 2008-04-11 06:47 PM

the feelings can also be very confuseing

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