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Teen Poetry #8

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krad008
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since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

0 posted 2008-03-17 03:32 PM

Two Different Worlds
Two Different People
I'm sorry im starting to change my mind again
Two different Futures
Two schedules no where near alike

Where is this all going
Whats happening
Why is this happening
Why us
Why now
Why

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-18 01:54 PM

i love this!!! I can understand completly where yooh are coming from!

Krysti

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10

Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.

2 posted 2008-03-18 05:17 PM

hey hey,
i really liked this poem. my grandparents divorced when i was a little kid, so it didn't really mean much to me, but i have three friends that have either been through or are going throug this with their parents and/or grandparents(wow, that felt like a run on sentance). great write,
!Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

starpower
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

3 posted 2008-03-18 05:53 PM

hey that was a nice poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

4 posted 2008-03-18 08:02 PM

thanks much appreciated

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

5 posted 2008-03-19 04:14 PM

great poem and you should never be afraid to change your mind

I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

6 posted 2008-03-19 10:40 PM

hey wow thats a nice poem u made its understandable

krad008
Member

since 2008-02-20

Posts 82

7 posted 2008-03-20 12:39 PM

thanks a lot everyone. Just been confused with life latetly

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

8 posted 2008-03-28 12:18 PM

nice write!

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