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surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2008-03-15 07:09 PM


Lonely
Shaking
And Pale
Life without meaning
Going
Sky deep
And ocean high
Gone
Seen
Only in rain
Droplets in my hair
Depression
Coming and going
Stuck
Inside my head
A nightmare
Passion
Scarcely there
Images
Bent
And twisted
Lingering thoughts
Pains
Just strains behind the eyes
Here we go
Lifeless
And bleeding
Scared
Monsters under the bed
It's where they wait
Seething and heaving
Nightmarish
Their fair
These are
My nightmares


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starpower
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 82
Utah
1 posted 2008-03-15 07:36 PM


hey that was a great poem and I love the ending of poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10
Posts 108
dark/little/heavan.:*:.
2 posted 2008-03-15 08:33 PM


hey hey,
i luved it. i deffinately struggle with nightmares, and i know how suffacating they can feel. just remember, nightmares are only in our heads, and can't get into the real world until we let them. speaking from experience, keep fighting and don't let what goes on in your head control how you act. it can really get, well... nightmarish. if that makes any sence. good write,
  !Tracey!

if you can touch me, i know i'm still only dying

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