Teen Poetry #8 |
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crimsonXnails Member
since 2008-02-10
Posts 108dark/little/heavan.:*:. |
hey, i wrote this one really quick, so it's not that good. for a smile, i greet you with a frown. for a dance, i curl up in a corner. for your love, i hide, and hate my heart. for approval, i don't make an effort. for happiness, i lay in the dark with a knife. what am i doing wrong? [This message has been edited by crimsonXnails (03-15-2008 08:19 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ummm maybe, maybe, it might be just me, but laying in the dark with a knife probably isn't the smartest thing you could do ![]() whatever happened to a stuffed animal?! ![]() |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
you could title it FOR... |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
hey can u read one of my poems called i neeeed a title plzzzz cuz like i really want one for that one |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
awww u used the title wut i said to u lol i never knew u would like the tilte when u neeeded one but tahts sweet |
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