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crimsonXnails
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since 2008-02-10
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dark/little/heavan.:*:.

0 posted 2008-03-13 10:54 PM


hey, i wrote this one really quick, so it's not that good.


for a smile,
i greet you with a frown.

for a dance,
i curl up in a corner.

for your love,
i hide, and hate my heart.

for approval,
i don't make an effort.

for happiness,
i lay in the dark with a knife.

what am i doing wrong?

[This message has been edited by crimsonXnails (03-15-2008 08:19 PM).]

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with you
1 posted 2008-03-14 09:33 AM


ummm maybe, maybe, it might be just me, but laying in the dark with a knife probably isn't the smartest thing you could do

whatever happened to a stuffed animal?!


maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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2 posted 2008-03-14 10:02 PM


you could title it FOR...
maddorani
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since 2007-11-18
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3 posted 2008-03-14 10:03 PM


hey can u read one of my poems called i neeeed a title plzzzz cuz like i really want one for that one
maddorani
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4 posted 2008-03-17 09:07 PM


awww u used the title wut i said to u lol i never knew u would like the tilte when u neeeded one but tahts sweet

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