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Teen Poetry #8

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Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-03-10 11:10 PM

This is a song i wrote. not technecly a poem but close enough. right? lol And i got a picture for all you people who like looking at pic's lol
Hope you guys like!!

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Lyric1 :PLease dont leave
I'll stay with you.. forever
My love your here
I will stay aeyayaya.

My love it is falling for you tonight
Its hot burning passion went out like a light
Wishing you were here.
To see..

Chores: So dont run..dont hide
You live to see
You loved for me
You wish to stay
Be free... I love you.. hope you feel the same

Lyric2 :Its okay.. its okay
Season are changeing and waves are crashing
Time is flying
My love i can see
Your life is not with me... aeyayaya

Please don't run away
Please tell me you'll stay
Dont walk away..

Chores: So don't run..don't hide
You live to see
You loved for me
You wish to stay
Be free..I love you.. hope you feel the same...

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

[This message has been edited by Falling rain (03-11-2008 08:30 AM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-03-13 02:00 AM

awwee Zach such a sweet song I loved it!!!
Krysti

Broken Toy
Junior Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 18
ThatSmallWorldCalledInsanity

2 posted 2008-03-13 04:11 PM

Aww, beautiful song, and i think you picked a good picture to match :P

I am a broken toy,
Of no use to anyone,
But if you fix me up,
I'm sure we'll have some fun.

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-03-13 05:23 PM

Loved it.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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