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Katarina
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since 2008-03-10
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0 posted 2008-03-10 03:54 AM



some days when im lonely
i dunno what anymore
somethimes i get monely
but soon i know it will get better

cause times i look in the mirror
and wonder what im doing right now
wondering, just wonding how

i know that my life might get better
but theres only one cure...

and thats if im with you
i know
its a big ask, of you
but you that i love you  

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since 2008-01-31
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1 posted 2008-03-10 08:33 AM


umm i think the way you were ryhmeing in this is sort of off. double check it. but besides that great poem!!

~Zach~  

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~



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