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Teen Poetry #8

A sad fairytale

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

0 posted 2008-03-09 10:46 PM

Sleeping beauty lies in her sleep.
Her beauty so rare
I lay at her bedside to cry and weap.
None to compair
My love forever lost
Black drapes lay around her bed
Her life was such a great cost
A pillow for her head.
Her hourglass ran out of sand.
A rose lays in her hand.
And i had no time to save
A typical fairytale lost in the sands of time.
Thy an utter fool and stupid nave.
Usually theres reason but this story has no ryhme...

I lay at her feet laying with her in a sleep
I drunk the drink intill no more
I'll never need to weap.
Together in the sky's we'll soar.

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When i said "drink" i didnt mean liquor or alcohal. i ment like a poision. like in romeo and juliet.. hope you guys like it!!

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

1 posted 2008-03-10 02:49 PM

This was really nice, I love how it was different from the usual fairytale poems..great job!

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

2 posted 2008-03-10 06:14 PM

great job here. talent seeps between the words. i like it alot.

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 247
inside the shadows

3 posted 2008-03-10 06:37 PM

Love it! Going in my library definatly. I like how you used a picture to describe the poem. Beautiful picture, beautiful poem. I'll be looking for more!

TJ

No One Knew She Bled To Feel; To Remind Herself That She Was Real

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