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Teen Poetry #8

a new writer

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-03-08 10:50 PM

these are 2 different poems by my friend whitney fleenor. she's never written before so don't be hatin' enjoy!!!!!!!
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The look has never left me.
The curtain rose
I was face to face w. the angel of death
I knew he could not be far from me
The whole of his life was gliding on the strings...he played as he would never play again
The race torward death had begun
I'm just an ordinary creature of flesh and blood
I can't go on...i can't stand anymore
I did not weep, and it pained me...No prayers were said...No candles were lit in memory.

and #2

my body temperature keeps dropping
these tears keep falling
i'm losing control
i will soon have to go
back to a place called home
My tears overflow
I'm losing all hope
I've lost control
I've got to go..
keagan

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-08 10:56 PM

yea i already read thouse before. and there really good. TWO THUMBS UP WHITNEY!!!! lol

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