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You'll Miss Me When I'm Gone!!
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You'll Miss Me When I'm Gone!! |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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Why do you do this, keep pushing your way in? For god sakes don’t you know by now that I’m not letting you win? I’m crying yet again, because all you do is make it worse I don’t want you’re pity, because it’s only a deadly curse Why do you need to put me, through so much pain? If only you knew the real reason I’m partially insane I’m so tired of living that i do nothing but cry You take away the best from me so god please let me die I’m living in a world of hate and you’re the center of it all You don’t know nothing, so just sit and watch me fall It’ll be your problem when I’m gone and you’re the reason why If only i could feel better, if only I couldn’t cry Tell me why you would want to break a perfectly good heart Just to see me fall down, and tear myself apart You’ll miss when I’m gone, and I’ll be gone tonight Life not about what’s better, it’s about what’s right. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Jess this is really good!!!!!!! hope things get better!!! |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
yes i agree. very well written. i like this alot. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
This is very beautiful, very sad and very true. Good write! "Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Awe, Jessie hun! I love it. But don't worry, I'll catch you when you fall. You did it for me and I'll to the same for you, luv ya! {~~*~~} {&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand] |
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maddorani Member
since 2007-11-18
Posts 423houston,tx |
i agree it is a nice poem |
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