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Teen Poetry #8

plastics..beware!

~frustrated writer~
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since 2008-02-25

Posts 84

0 posted 2008-03-08 06:44 AM

a menopausal baby was born
in everyone's heart, happiness she had thrown
only girl in the family, no one could take her throne
a girl who always smiles until dawn.

mayor in the class of section Kepler
a very responsible leader
hates plastic people, so beware
when you have problems, expect her to be there.

she has this loud voice causing the mirrors to break
she can't see clearly even if there's light, how much more in the dark?
in her own way, she'd make a mark
a mark that will forever stay in everyone's heart.

she's like a clown that take away your madness
and replace it with gladness
number one when it comes to craziness
but she's your happy-go-lucky girl with so much kindness.

**hope my friend likes this one..

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-08 10:26 AM

wow nice write! i found the message in your poem to be sort of fugue and confuseing to me. can you explain a little?

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