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rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

0 posted 2008-03-07 09:32 PM

dont bother critquing i know it sucks but idc

no one ever makes you do anything
you do it all yourself
everything that youve screwed up
is your fault and no one else
cutting is an addiction
that only brings more pain
u only cut cuz ur friends do
you have no idea of real pain
cussing is your own problem
cuz u dont know how to close your lips
you find people who have the same problem
and with all that bitterness
you only throw fits
you are confused
cuz you dont know the truth
its in God's word and in His people
but do you fellowship in these things?
no, u cuss them out, u cut because you know their right
but you dont want to face it, u cant face it
face the fact that life is shorter than it seems
too short to be messing around
and while they are living fully
your just searching, searching for a numbing
your only searcing for a numbness
to ease the pain that it causes to search
an endless cycle of your life
your getting sick of it
you want to end it
well guess what life aint dandy for us either
but it dont matter to us
because we have a secret
a universal secret that heals and helps
dont mean to be boastful
but we always win
never loose
with that secret we always use
we aint alone
united we are
trying to save you from the sea
no your too far
you cant go home because your lost
but we dont need to go home
were already there
in a house full of abusers im there
and i know it
proud to show it
for once inviting people over
so they can share it
my home is were my heart is
as it is with my treasures
painful as it may be
im happy
and will be forever
dont think we pick on you
we care about all that do like you do
i have stopped worrying
but am still there
i will be here forever
because of that secret
that binds me together
im trying, pushing
to share with you that secret
because everyone else knows
that all we can say to you is
you reap what you sow

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

1 posted 2008-03-07 11:34 PM

great write

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

2 posted 2008-03-08 12:36 PM

it doesnt suck
it makes sense well 2 me
thats good that u have stopped worrying
it means u stopped caring thats good

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

3 posted 2008-03-08 01:29 AM

hiddensmiles: thanks

justanotherstorm: thanx, and it should..
dummy, it dont mean ive stoped caring, it means ive stopped worrying so that i dont care so much it hurts which is wrong cuz God says to bear one anothers burdens. u jump, i jump. but this is saying otherwise. its saying im tired of being hurt, and tired of hurting cuz i care so much. i know God will reward me for caring, but im sick of caring SO MUCH so im disobeying for a while....with 1 or 2 people at least. i need to worry about myself for a change this year. and btw it says " i have stopped worrying but i am still here i will be here forever" god gave us life that most of us lay aside but its always there for us to take n e time we want. i wanna and gunna try to b like that.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

4 posted 2008-03-08 12:41 PM

this is soooo goood

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

5 posted 2008-03-08 01:00 PM

hye thanx. havent heard from u in a while.

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

6 posted 2008-03-08 06:23 PM

this isn't bad, its GREAT!! you dont have to worry of what ppl think. i know its always good to get good replys but just dont worry. ppl here are nice and not too judgemental lol. keep the writing coming!!

sincerely,

~Zach~

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

7 posted 2008-03-08 06:39 PM

hahah thanks zack

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

8 posted 2008-03-09 06:47 PM

Absolutly wonderful. I understand this poem very well and it's AWESOME!!!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

9 posted 2008-03-09 09:29 PM

thanx earl!!!!

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

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