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Broken Toy
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since 2008-02-29
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ThatSmallWorldCalledInsanity

0 posted 2008-03-06 11:32 AM


Adieu

Darkness echos on every floor,
I know that I've been here before,
Before I knew you were real,
Before I knew my heart could feel,
I knew that you were out there, somewhere,
And I knew that someday you'd care.

You'd see my happy smiling face,
And set my heart at a faster pace,
To make me feel like I exist,
Making sure I couldn't resist,
Your carfully selected words,
Made my heart sing like birds.

Now you've opened up a hole,
Which I had thought someone stole,
Hidden in a web of pain,
Forever it was supposed to remain,
Never seeing the light of day,
Making my happy existance fray.

Can your love truely be real?
For I don't know if i can feel,
You're too good to be true,
Even though there's nothing to prove,
You care for me too much it seems,
As if you've leapt out from my dreams.

Leaping out from my soul,
And this must be what you have stole,
Because I cannot see more,
That what was infront of me before,
Like you're shrouded in a mystery,
And inconspicuality.

But I will know if your love is true,
I'll be counting the days 'til we say "Adieu".

I am a broken toy,
Of no use to anyone,
But if you fix me up,
I'm sure we'll have some fun.

© Copyright 2008 Broken Toy - All Rights Reserved
ShawtySheFly
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since 2007-12-19
Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)
1 posted 2008-03-06 11:44 AM


it's all good!!! kool job btw i lik ur signature

A house of cards in a >hurricane^

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2008-03-11 01:06 AM


wow I love this the flow was great!!!! hope to read more soon\
Krysti

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

3 posted 2008-03-11 01:18 PM


NIIIIICE WRITE!
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2008-03-11 09:28 PM


Interesting write Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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