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Teen Poetry #8

mistakenLy inLove

~frustrated writer~
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since 2008-02-25

Posts 84

0 posted 2008-03-06 06:41 AM

for a moment i thought you are my world
my inspiration, my dream, that's what they call
but i wake up and realize i am just dreaming
to have you in my life is impossible to happen.

i can't understand why you made me cry
the feeling i had for you is never a lie
don't you know that every time i am with you
i bring the memories hugging my pillow.

i'm sorry if i love you deep within
i really though you're the one sent from heaven
you made me smile in the midst of problem
that's what you bring in my life that never be forgotten.

i don't know if what i've felt is clear to you
i will be happy if your answer is "no"
because even if i had shed my tears
i can still smile and understand your silence.

nut loving you indeed is a big mistake
for i know you can't return it and just make me sick
but how can i tell my very stupid heart
that with you, i am just...
mistakenly in love!

tiny_ME
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since 2008-03-01

Posts 26

1 posted 2008-03-10 11:43 PM

,.,.uhmmm...
i could sense something,.., :p

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2008-03-11 06:19 PM

I loved this, especially the last stanza.\
Pen

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2008-03-11 09:27 PM

interesting

ARCTIC WIND

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

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4 posted 2008-03-12 01:18 AM

wow! i've definmately unfortunatly been here before.... I can really realte i loved it the flow of your poems are always my favorite part
Krysti

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