She is all that is racing through my mind....(sort of a love poem)

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She is all that is racing through my mind....(sort of a love poem)

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-03-05 11:48 PM

This girl has been in my head so much lately but she kinda doesn't see me as more than a friend.... but i really like her soooo here is a poem about it.. enjoy
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She says she can't see
The love for her that comes from inside me
I can't feel the pain
My feelings for her have come up from the drain

I'm screaming for her love
She is so beautiful, so soft like a dove
She doesn't realize that I'm there
Is it that she doesn't even care?

Her smile is reminds me of a sunny day
Forgive me for tomorrow, if I may
I just can't say goodbye
These things keep happening, I will not cry

This world is to small for my needs
But I don't care about your dirty deeds
Come closer to me, I want to see those pretty eyes
If you can hear me, answer my why's

I see you everyday and I try to talk
I take two steps toward you and off you walk
If I can't have you today, I'll wait for the bait
It's for your love that I can wait......

Keagan....

~-Keagan-~

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-06 08:29 AM

WHOA! thats a really good poem Keagan!! Hope the girl who doesnt notice's you, find's you really quick... hold in there bud.. she'll relize soon..

have a great day!

~Zach~

Broken Toy
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since 2008-02-29

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ThatSmallWorldCalledInsanity

2 posted 2008-03-06 11:03 AM

Im sure if she read that you'd never keep her off

Nice poem, keep it up.

I am a broken toy,
Of no use to anyone,
But if you fix me up,
I'm sure we'll have some fun.

ShawtySheFly
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since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

3 posted 2008-03-06 11:33 AM

hahah omg are you my boyfriend? LOL jk it's funny cuz last night i spent 2 hrs wit a guy dat told me the exact words. Small world

A house of cards in a >hurricane^

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-03-06 03:21 PM

lol i know the feeling,
Strange thing love.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

5 posted 2008-03-06 07:46 PM

awe! this is such a sweet poem! it's wonderful. Great job,

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

starpower
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 82
Utah

6 posted 2008-03-15 07:40 PM

Wow that was a great poem

You can send me an email,
Thanks

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

7 posted 2008-03-16 10:09 PM

wow i really luv this realli beautifull
Krysti

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