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Teen Poetry #8

From Radiant Darkness She Falls

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-03-03 06:21 PM

Deep in her heart
is the affection she
feels, up in her black
sky nothing seems real.
One day she will fall,
landing in the sun. The
moon herself will be
his radiant number one.

And so the moon fell
in love with the sun,
out of the darkness she
falls. A number one star
shining so bright, 'cause
she now lives in the
suns light.

{~~*~~}

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

1 posted 2008-03-03 11:00 PM

Interesting way of looking at it...I love it! This is awsome!

*cough library cough*

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

theiamsadsong
Junior Member

since 2008-03-03

Posts 17

2 posted 2008-03-05 12:44 PM

this is really beautiful i love how you incorporate nature in your work!!!!
Love,
monica

maddorani
Member

since 2007-11-18

Posts 423
houston,tx

3 posted 2008-03-13 05:27 PM

yea i liked it too hehe

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-03-13 05:33 PM

whoa this is really good. and yes this too is going in my library.

~Zach~

~*With the wind and my heart at my side. I'll live the life i want*~

ShawtySheFly
Member

since 2007-12-19

Posts 71
In his Elevator (LOL)

5 posted 2008-03-17 11:33 AM

good poem i liked it alot

I.>ROCK"my<Converse^cuz%i'm`RETRO*likeDAT

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

6 posted 2008-03-18 12:07 PM

oooo this was tight. thats it YOU are going inmy library as a fav author

only a vampire can love you forever.
forbidden to remember, terrified to forget

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

7 posted 2008-03-18 10:30 PM

Emily!!!!!!!! this is very good...i like how you write....your amazing

~-Keagan-~

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