a present on valentine's day

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Teen Poetry #8

a present on valentine's day

~frustrated writer~
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since 2008-02-25

Posts 84

0 posted 2008-03-03 06:40 AM

we have this super considerate teacher
she is also our great adviser
who loves to eat rebisco cracker
for her, everything doesn't matter.

today is valentine's day
we hope this present of ours could make her happy
for this is the only way
to tell her that we are so lucky...

since she is already old,
sometimes, in her class we get bored
but that doesn't mean we don't understand what's written on the board.
for when she gives us quiz, that's our mighty sword.

shift to the right
do what is right
to attain the equilibrium of our life
this is our motto, inspired by our mentor's rebisco.

>> this was given to our adviser last heart's day.. our mayor asked me to do a poem for her, and here it is..kinda funny..and the sad part is, i wasn't able to witnessed when our mentor read it aloud in the class.. ;[

theiamsadsong
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since 2008-03-03

Posts 17

1 posted 2008-03-03 01:31 PM

this poem is amazing! and you said you gave it to a teacher? i took your words very personally as valentines day also holds a very sentimentally poignant place for me.(if you could comment on my poem plz that would be nice too!)

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
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2 posted 2008-03-03 05:35 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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