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~frustrated writer~
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0 posted 2008-03-01 08:28 AM



"am i still your baby?"
was my first text since we had a conflict
she did not reply right away
so i thought she had still that hatred for me so deeply.

four hours after, she replied
"you'll always be..that's if i remain to be you mummy?"
my heart's jumping while reading her text
with a smile so big painted on my face.

beginning that night, i had a sleep so well
nothing more to worry until i dwell
now, my christmas would be merry
knowing that no one's angry with me already.

i know i've hurt her feelings so much
and i also had a hard time thinking if it's right
but being forgiven is enough, and..
i am sorry.. is not "easier" said, after all.


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RedNail
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1 posted 2008-03-01 11:48 PM


A really cute poem.


Life is a rollercoster, live for the ride.

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2 posted 2008-03-02 12:29 PM


ohhhh wow.. I know howw hard it iz tue sai sorrie.... I really loved the feeling in this poem... amazing!!
Krysti

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