Teen Poetry #8 |
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Confusion |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
I'm confused about you I'm confused about me I'm confused about life and what its sappose to be I'm confused about dreams that are crushed in my sight I'm confused about tears and why they fall from these eyes I'm confused about time and why it has to fly by I'm confused about thoughts that dont leave my mind I'm confused about love and if i will get a happy ending I'm confused about feelings that i feel when im around you all this confusion is hurting my mind but time will give the answer to these trials |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
when i read this only one word came to my mind "adolesent" lol. i dont know why though. i guess when your growing up you just dont know whats going on. because your learning on whats, what. And thus always being confused. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
really to be honest this is not about me...and that would make sense knowing the person i am writing about |
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Falling rain![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
oh i see so the person your writing about is a adolecent? |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
yes...but it is about her because she asks and worrys about alot of stuff...but seeing as i wrote it, it probly is a bit about me too |
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Ri Member
since 2008-02-01
Posts 67Blackburn, England |
I often wonder why we do actually cry when we are sad, and love cannot really be clearly defined One could say the confusions presented i this poem aren't just for adolescents; but life long. Nice poem =) |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
thank you JJ |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
JJ, very nice poem I really liked it! Krysti |
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wisdomofthesword Member
since 2007-12-17
Posts 224the last place on earth |
great poem I don't care if you think I'm a fool but don't ever tell me so |
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masksrlife Member
since 2008-03-26
Posts 109Canada |
I love this poem! But who's it about? you dont have to write it on here acctrually you dont have to say at all but im just curious if i know this person. lol |
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Katarina Junior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 15AUSTRALIA, N.S.W |
really nice i always wonder of these things |
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xbrokenxlullabyx Junior Member
since 2007-12-25
Posts 36NJ, U.S.A. |
I'm confused about dreams that are crushed in my sight I'm confused about tears and why they fall from these eyes I'm confused about time and why it has to fly by I'm confused about thoughts that dont leave my mind i like these two stanzas the best. great job! Susanna V. |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
thank you!! you all are so nice! JJ |
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rockangel_gv Junior Member
since 2008-03-29
Posts 43 |
I like this poem. I think is great. |
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23heavens New Member
since 2008-04-02
Posts 8India |
Hey Loved this Poem...propably best describes how im feeling right now...Great Write...!!! |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
thank you! JJ |
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