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much of a story.. |
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~frustrated writer~ Member
since 2008-02-25
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i wish to speak of something hurtful enough to keep it's not so easy to sa but we both lost our way a hundred miles away from home caught between walls; we're all alone.. i feel so scared.. are you still on the other side? where are you? did you find some place to hide? why don't you answer my call? i know you could hear me despite this wall. are you afraid too? or did you find someone to talk to? are you still thinking about me? how do i look like, how do i feel? did you find home? is it warn there? 'coz here, it's cold. you always said you'll wait for me to cross this wall until it's weak enough to fall i told you to go on your journey you said no, you'll never leave me so i trusted you to be there i forgot about being scared because you showed me how much you cared but now you're gone without a word of goodbye again, i should not cry you had your sunset without seeing the sunrise and for that who's to blame? but then i say without much of a shame I'm sorry for believing you'll never leave me it's not you're fault that I'm tired and lonely because believe me.. this is much of a story that I'll forever cherish until the end of life's journey.. ♥character is more important than reputation..♥ **LiRa** |
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~frustrated writer~ Member
since 2008-02-25
Posts 84 |
"it's not so easy to sa but we both lost our way" oopss! sorry.. i wrote "sa" in this line instead of "say" **LiRa** |
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~frustrated writer~ Member
since 2008-02-25
Posts 84 |
"is it warn there? 'coz here, it's cold." >> here aLso, it shouLd be "warm" not "warn".. sorry.. **Lira** |
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