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Teen Poetry #8

Heard and Yet not Heard

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2008-02-27 09:29 PM

Heard and Yet not Heard

Ah my favorite sound
Oh the music that abounds
That grows so near to me

I forget what they say
And try though I may
To understand a task incomplete

I mouth along
And sing every song
To words that I once knew

But the meanings have escaped
The truth of what I say
And now it’s only sound

It’s funny how that works
The things the mind does shirk
And the way we let it loose

But the true game understanding
The rules and where you’re standing
For the words mean most of all

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-27 09:41 PM

I don't know if it's just me, but i got alot more out of this poem than just words about music. lovely poem and thanks for the read, I was getting bored!! heheh

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-27 09:43 PM

Full of emotion Write!

ARCTIC WIND

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-02-27 11:58 PM

I could not agree more. This is beautiful...especialy to me!

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

4 posted 2008-02-28 11:34 AM

I THINK YOU ARE ONE OF THE MOST TALENTED POETS HERE I ALWAYS LOVE YOUR STUFF..WITH THAT SAID LET ME COMMENT ON THIS POEM, FOR ME THIS WAS REFRESHING..AS I WAS READING IT I FELT A LITTLE SMILE COME ON..SO I WANT TO THANK YOU BECAUSE I WAS HAVING A HORRIBLE MORNING! THANK YOU..GREAT JOB!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-02-28 04:21 PM

aww thanks everyone especailly fromme2you- that really means alot to me that you think so highly- i only write what's in my head- thanks today was tough- i needed to hear something positive today.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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