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~frustrated writer~
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0 posted 2008-02-26 04:50 AM



he said she was nice
she said he's just being nice
he said she was funny
she said he's just being corny.

he said she was pretty
she said he is such a pity
he said he wouldn't fall
she said he won't at all.

he said she's someone he'll never fall in love with
she said maybe not
he said he fell for her
she said she fell for him too.

but he said he has to go
she said she'll let him go
he said he wants to be free
she said they're not meant to be.

she said he can go now
he said, "no"
she asked, "why?"
he said, "i"

she said, "what?"
he said, "love"
she asked, "who?"
he said, "you!"


** hope you'll have fun reading this poem of mine.. =)


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1 posted 2008-02-26 09:21 AM


cute!
krad008
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2 posted 2008-02-26 03:50 PM


Thats a Really sweet poem. Because I no thats gonna happen to me next year. And frankly I dont wanna say it to her.
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3 posted 2008-02-26 06:08 PM


aww this is nice. keep it up!

~Zach~  



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4 posted 2008-02-27 01:18 AM


awwee such a shweet poem hunn loved it!!!
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5 posted 2008-02-27 07:01 PM


this is sweet...


SunnySyn
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6 posted 2008-02-27 07:24 PM


Awwww.... [Wipes tear]. I'm jealous of a girl in a poem!!! lol... That was very sweet.

Signing off,
        SunnySyn =)

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7 posted 2008-02-27 08:55 PM


haha, wonderful. I love it dearly

{&}Love*liesOfBeauty~[NowColdInMyHand]
{`~Emily~`}

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8 posted 2008-02-29 05:59 PM


Enjoyed...

ARCTIC WIND

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