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Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2008-02-25 06:18 PM

Love is what keeps us tethered to this earth.
And love is what keeps us from becoming shadows. But love has its price, to be paid in, heartaches, and worries.
Fights and make ups, and long distance phone calls.

But my love for you surmounts all those obsticles and puts me in your arms each night.
And your kisses in my dreams.
As long as you know I love you we will not be apart.

For every step you take my heart takes for with you.
Every tear you cry my heart collects.
And every time you whisper my name the wind will take it home to me.

I will never forget.
And for ever word i said that hurt and every blow you felt, my heart felt twice as much as you.
Well your gone please know,... you take my love to.
Each night before I sleep I whisper... I Love You.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

[This message has been edited by Abbeon (02-27-2008 02:22 PM).]

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2008-02-26 02:21 AM

Hey hunn.... haha yooh noe me and probably whutt ima sai to this..... STRUCTURE hehe I loved it the words were beautiful just pure and amazing!!! but the long lines made it harder tue read.... but best wishes tue yooh
Love ya
Krysti

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

2 posted 2008-02-27 02:23 PM

Is this a bit better?

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

SunnySyn
Junior Member

since 2008-02-19

Posts 15
Texas, United States

3 posted 2008-02-27 07:39 PM

That was beautiful. It's amazing how a few simple words arranged with a message can cause so much emotion. I loved it. =)

Signing off,
SunnySyn =)

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2008-02-28 01:38 AM

YESSS this iz soo much better hunn!!!\Love it!!
Krysti

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

5 posted 2008-02-28 06:15 PM

WOW This poem left me with a warm fuzzy feeling!
I love it when that happens! (lol)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2008-02-29 04:23 PM

Thank you all very much. To be completely honest... I had no clue what I was writing about, because well "love is foreign to a frozen heart" as the quote says. I never been in love but I was writing this for all those who are.

Thanks for putting up with me,
Beckie.

The hollow emptiness, the crazed thoughts left to survive

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