Falling rain
Member Elite
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
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2008-02-22
01:52 PM
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She dances with an eliquoent grace She steps with an ease in her pace
With the leap in the air she flys way on high Just to land right down from the pale, blue sky
The lights glitter and gleam While on her face, her smile beams
Watching her dance Leaves me in a never-ending trace
With a prance and twirl Her dress flutters and flurls
She loves to dance. We can plainly see But will she fall for a guys like me?
I do not know how to dance Im clumsly and i do not prance
Her beauty is none to compair Just like her long, dark ,course hair
Her dance is finishing. i must go For me i do not know
If she'll like whom i be What if she does? but that dream i can't see. With the finishing pose Then begans the throwing of the rose
[This message has been edited by Falling rain (02-22-2008 06:50 PM).]
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2008
Zach Booker-Scott
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hiddensmiles
Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514
at the beach... i wish
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2008-02-22
06:00 PM
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i like this! well written!
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Earl Robertson
Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753
BC, Canada
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2008-02-22
09:03 PM
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Nicely done!"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl
"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl (Yes I am crazy)
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hunnie_girl
Member Elite
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567
Canada
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2008-02-23
01:16 PM
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ohh Zach beautiful poem.... ahh.. i cant dance either :P Krysti
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Dark Star
Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
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2008-02-23
03:19 PM
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great picture
xoxoxooxox-star
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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
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2008-02-24
10:11 AM
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You are growing more as a poet here!
I am glad to see that you are getting better
each time!
ARCTIC WIND
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Falling rain
Member Elite
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois
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posted
2008-02-24
07:06 PM
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Thank smiles,Earl,hunnie_girl, Star, And Arctic wind.
This poem isnt my favorite. i worte this a long time ago and i just dug it out of the dungion (or my room) and posted it on here. LOL. thanks guys!~Zach~
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