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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

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0 posted 2008-02-09 02:37 PM

Let Eyes See what Ears won’t Hear

It’s a fair cry to say “I’m sorry”
It just never seems to do,
But all thoughts so leave my mind
When I think of words for you

To unburden and then reject
The help you want to give
Seems an awful deed
To appalling to let live

So- what can I come to say?
Would anything turn your ear?
Are there any words to express,
The things you want to hear?

So this is my humble offering
From my heart so worded here
I hope it is enough
To gain back what I hold dear

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

1 posted 2008-02-09 04:58 PM

hmmmm...I like this alot. it really flows together well. Great job

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-02-09 11:27 PM

That was an exelent an amazing poem!
However if I am reading into it correctly you have a major problem. You also have it figured out better than I, so I wish you the best of luck in your social life and suggest that you follow your own advise. (I'll probably be following it to)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-02-10 08:42 AM

oh it's already fixed, i always say i'm sorry . . . i'm very forgiveing and very sorry for everything i or anyone does. i just have the trouble in forgiving my slef sometimes. which i'm working on, but yea, i wrote this . . . . a month ago? yea around then- problem solved.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-02-10 07:41 PM

Well we have a lot in common. I have a hard time forgiving myself, and an equaly hard time taking real offence. Glad you solved your problem.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-02-10 09:13 PM

must be our mormon complex, lol.
umm you know i really really enjoy chatting with you earl, frank, whatever your name is. thanks- you make me feel heard.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

6 posted 2008-02-11 07:44 AM

hmmm It was interesting But I'm not sure if the title goes or maybe I haven't seen how the title fits yet

fromme2U
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since 2007-11-09

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7 posted 2008-02-11 11:25 AM

Great job!

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

8 posted 2008-02-11 03:01 PM

I like chatting with you to Kate. (lol)

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

9 posted 2008-02-11 07:24 PM

oph i can believe i forgot to explain this title, it came because i couldn't seem to speak the words- hence the ears hearing- well they couldn't, and so i wrote it down on paper- hence let eyes see- very personal connection sorry for not shraing.

-Kate

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