His Story (why SS is NOT useful)

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

0 posted 2008-02-05 11:03 PM

Watch while lifeblood flows unending
Generations pass unseen
Watch while I record his story
Fable of a world seen

Watch while man destroys his brother
Madness, Beauty, War his story
Watch while chaos reins supreme
And Emperor’s steal the glory

Watch while endless day’s of peace
Are overshadowed by war
Watch while history orders all
Repeating again as before

Watch while drunk men choose strange routes
And save the tyrant boy
Watch as the same, only story is told
To explain fates fickle toy

Watch while man is ignorant
Of his own beginning thought
Watch while with a thinking mind
He tears himself apart

Watch as man does fool himself
To see the present and the past
Watch and know a mothers hate
Which caused a war that was to last

Watch, know the full beginning
And you will know the end
Watch and see the fable, spread and ordered in a row
See the fable history, order, make-believe and pretend

Watch while lifeblood flows unending
That no earthly record shows
Watch and know the full beginning
That you may fix the end

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2008-02-08 06:28 PM

Watch while lifeblood flows unending
Generations pass unseen
Watch while I record his story
Fable of a world seen

w-o-w, nice stuff earl. wow. these were unbelieveably good lines- just perfection in a poem.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-02-08 06:32 PM

I'm not so sure about that.

Thanks Kate

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-02-08 06:35 PM

ahahaha I made ya blush!

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

4 posted 2008-02-09 06:20 AM

Very good Earl and much enjoyed. A thought provoking powerful piece, one question tho'....what is SS ?

John

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-09 09:01 AM

Watch while lifeblood flows unending
That no earthly record shows
Watch and know the full beginning
That you may fix the end

Love that line. your poems are so amazing! expesially this one.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

6 posted 2008-02-09 02:59 PM

you are soooo rite!!!! Social Studies iz such a waste of tyme hahaha:P great poem i loved it!!!
Krysti

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