Teen Poetry #8 |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
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I understand the flow is off and it kinda cuts off weird. lol this is deff one of my worse poems, but i decided to share it nonetheless. I looked up to her I respected her And I put her above them all If only I had known The cruelty she'd later show I'd never have let her see me fall Let down by my hero struck down by her tongue she made me feel so inferior, so small I hafta move on The world just doesnt wait For one's happiness to reinstall This just goes to show you can't rely on anyone They'll all at some point let you down. I've decided to cling to Someone highter up I'm stickin to my savior, From now on. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
"If only I had known The cruelty she'd later show I'd never have let her see me fall" One of my favorite parts in the poem^^ Plus the ending, of course, was beautiful. Mmm...So, I don't really think this is my favorite of yours but I did like the general idea of the poem. Thanks for sharing ya double poster you! ![]() "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
rofl. yepp thats me the double poster! yessss! thanks for the comment : ) you rock! |
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hunnie_girl![]() ![]()
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
I've decided to cling to Someone highter up I'm stickin to my savior, From now on. that poem was truly amazing this wasn't my favorite either...i guess no poem can beat the poem in honour of stargal:P ha-ha jk but good write beka.... hunnie* ![]() A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
lol thanks. and you're right. i do believe the one i wrote for stargal was absolutely fantastic. jk jk ; ) |
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