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Teen Poetry #8

Have We Lost Sight

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-02-04 06:21 AM

some might say
that this was meant
to go astray
and as we fall
into the haze
of another day
i could say
i would say
its not the way

and sorry never makes it right
cant take away all the fights
i never said it would be fine
have we lost sight

here we are
the wings are cut
but they leave no scar
now that
your all alone
have times got hard

and sorry never makes it right
cant take away all the fights
never said it would be fine
have we lost sight

and its sad when its come to this
and to think theres so much we missed
letting go is the hardest part

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-02-04 07:45 AM

Your right letting go is the hardest part. love the poem, keep up the good work!!!

surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

2 posted 2008-02-04 09:49 AM

oh wow this poem can represent alot of things or atleast it did for me and you could almost feel the pain it was throwing off

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-02-05 01:59 AM

great poem CO!!!!
Krysti

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-02-05 05:11 PM

Great poem Mr Orange! I'm always amazed by your poetry.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

[This message has been edited by Earl Robertson (02-05-2008 11:20 PM).]

rebel~angel
Member

since 2006-06-20

Posts 71
Iowa USA

5 posted 2008-02-11 01:13 PM

i loved that...i really did....i don't know why, and i have the hardest time explaining exactly how i liked it or what i liked or why...but it was amazing!

Remember:Tuck your chin, you're going to get hurt, so expect it and be ready. You might as well see it coming.
-Elizabeth Haydon, Requiem for the Sun

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