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XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-03 09:12 PM

Can this be what you realy
wanted honey? To leave me here
alone and dying? Everything
you ever said was a lie, nothing
about you is true.

I sit here by the piano listening
to the falling rain of
depression. Playing random tunes
of sorrow, I'm far away from
where I need to be.

I thought you cared for me and
my life, you promised you would
make it all go away. You said
that everything would be fine,
that I just had to wait for a day
that never came.

The rain will forever pour down
on me, soaking my life with defeat.
I thought that someone realy cared,
I thought for a fraction of a
minute, that I mattered.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

I am the arch angel
Member

since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

1 posted 2008-02-03 11:11 PM

Hey Emily this is a great poem !!!! i like it a lot
Different when i said is what i meant is that i'm depressed alot but i do not cut myself and i like dark things but i do not think about an under world and stuff like that i'm in between i'm made fun of a lot in school because i do listen to heavy metal and punk rock screamo music because rap is what every body likes and if you don't like rap or you aren't wearing hollister and all that clothing your different and your made fun of not to mention my life is already messed(damm these rules) up big time

~-Keagan-~

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-03 11:22 PM

hey great poem! i like it alot! and i noticed im in your poem lol
"I sit here by the piano listening
to the falling rain of
depression."
^^^^^^^^^^^^ see right up there lol

But this poem is really good i wish i can write like you can =]

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

3 posted 2008-02-04 05:30 PM

thank you both for the comments! And dont worry if people make fun of you! 'cause you know what? You are who you want to be, and if you don't act like it you're a big fake! I know everyone has there differences and thats why I realy don't care if people make fun of me. Because to me, they're the retards. Screw what they think, as long as they don't try to kill me I'm good! Thanks again you guys! I'm glad you liked it!!

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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