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Betrayal |
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Ian L.R. Sanchez Junior Member
since 2007-07-05
Posts 16 |
Liar, liar, Heart of fire. You only do things, For your own desire. The promise you gave me, What was the point of it?. Was it for me to show my heart? And for you to hit? Every time I try my best, You always look away. I opened up as wide as possible, But there’s nothing you would say. I also have my problems, I’d tell you every single one of them, But you never ask me anything, And I started to lose my rhythm. That day had come, Happiness was a lack. I felt something behind me, It was a knife you used to stab my back. That day I felt something inside, Something that is very cruel, The only thing I hoped I’ll never experience, And that is betrayal. I hate getting betrayed, I feel it’d be worst than drowning. It’s like dying but still alive, With a life full of suffering. |
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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed Senior Member
since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062In Love <3 |
"Liar, liar, Heart of fire. You only do things, For your own desire." and "It’s like dying but still alive," were my fave. lines. i completely understand the "It’s like dying but still alive," oh man if i could live without ever feeling that again i would be over joyed. it was beautifully written. -Kate and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night |
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