While it has just began, i see the end

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Teen Poetry #8

While it has just began, i see the end

I am the arch angel
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since 2008-02-02

Posts 167
nowhere,illinois,USA

0 posted 2008-02-02 11:25 PM

With every step i take my life seems to slip,

I don't know hot to change should I use this clip?

With my life would you like to compare?

i just seem to slither down in this chair

Before i forget this just let me say

That this has went through my head day-by-day

Why does it always seem that i am pretending?

I sit in the darkness i'm tired of venting

I don't need any help i can stand on my own

All i have to do is stay inside the walls of this home

My windows are breaking, emotions are flying

But outside my body just keeps dying

Why can't I run away, stay away, hide away from this hell?

It is all that has happened that has kept me in this shell

Don't stop thinking this is the end, keep beliveing

Becuase im still here, and i'm not leaving

~-Keagan-~

[This message has been edited by I am the arch angel (02-03-2008 10:39 PM).]

RevengeIsMine
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since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-02-02 11:29 PM

loved it when zach posted it.. love it now.. great write.. Welcome to Passions and keep writing,
Much Love,
Jess

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-02 11:46 PM

hey keagan! ha this is Zach. sweet poem. can't wait to see more of your work. also welcome to PIP!

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

3 posted 2008-02-03 09:01 AM

Keagan, wow what a sweet name. lol. Nice poem, as i told zach earilier, can't wait to see more.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

fox16
New Member

since 2008-09-18

Posts 5
US of A

4 posted 2008-09-18 11:54 PM

Nice one keep it up and i have 3 poems so far ha well its a start ~Trent~

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