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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
Posts 513


0 posted 2007-06-23 09:16 PM


They walk on by me
And to me it seems like
I'm just another face in the crowd
My world is changing
Changing so fast
Am I the same
Or have I completely turned around?

I don't know whats goin' on
Feel like I'm a little lost
The uncertainty is drowning me
And I wonder what they see
When they walk by me

I've never been too good
At the popularity thing
It's just that the me I am
Is never the me they choose to see
But that's alright
I'm not gonna fight who I am
Just tell me a bit about
The me they choose to see

Is she smart, way too witty?
Or is she talented and pretty?
An outcast, an outsider,
Do you think you might invite her?

Yeah, I'm an outcast, an outsider
I am calm and I'm a fighter
I'm determined
I am strong
And I've just figured out that something's wrong

We're all playing the same game
And it's gettin' pretty lame
This could be where we change
And we'll never be the same...

We don't know what's goin on
And we feel a little lost
Drowning in uncertainty
And I know you wonder what I see
When you walk by me

© Copyright 2007 Cierra L. Robbeloth - All Rights Reserved
Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23
Posts 620
Space Camp, IN
1 posted 2007-06-23 09:43 PM


very nice.  I loved it very much. that is what high school is all about...judgment.
RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
Posts 1062
In Love <3
2 posted 2007-06-23 09:47 PM


highschool sucks, beautiful job as always. i only had to look at the first line to know it would be astounding.

-Red

and if i had to choose between the whole world and you- there would be no competition

-Amanda Ann (my best friend)

Alaina
Member
since 2007-06-16
Posts 106

3 posted 2007-06-23 11:00 PM


i really liked this...it has such true meaning.
Sad_eyed_girl
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since 2007-06-04
Posts 8

4 posted 2007-06-23 11:35 PM


good work highschool really does suck.
surf_painter
Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
5 posted 2007-06-26 06:46 PM


good rendition of high school life i definitely felt like this more then once or twice
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