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Teen Poetry #8

Doubt

XxForever.BrokenxX
Senior Member

since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-02-02 01:36 PM

I doubted you, that you
really cared.
For some reason I
don't believe you.
But if you weren't so
strong I know
as almost a fact I wouldn't
be here.The weight would
have pulled me under,
persuaded me to die.
Though I still
live in a stone cold
November, suicied is no
longer an option, no longer
a threat, no longer a way out.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (02-04-2008 10:31 PM).]

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-05-19 09:30 PM

Wow this is an old one.. but the oldies are always good to listen or read lol

~Zach~

"Fate leads the willing, and drags along the reluctant."

shakalakaboomboom
Junior Member

since 2008-05-19

Posts 44
V.A, U.S.A

2 posted 2008-05-19 09:35 PM

well i liked it and im not old =]

~Savana

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