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Clockwork_Orange
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since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

0 posted 2008-01-29 06:17 AM

lost here in my anger
where its grown so cold and dark
ill never forget
a single word you said
i took everything to heart

and now im choking on the ashes
of the lies you fed to me
does it make you feel good
to know you made me bleed

im just confused and lost
because you made me believe
but i guess the truth was too hard
so you lied to me

i cant say i understand
i cant say its right
but i just dont want to deal with it
i dont want to fight

liar liar
my hearts on fire
and no water may put it out
i should think its only fair
that i should have my doubts

[This message has been edited by Clockwork_Orange (01-30-2008 09:06 PM).]

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1 posted 2008-01-29 09:42 AM

sorry you are hurting...

XxForever.BrokenxX
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2 posted 2008-01-30 12:10 PM

why dont u just believe her? she's not lying to u.

Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21

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BC, Canada

3 posted 2008-01-30 01:46 PM

Ignorance is bliss, hurts to have it shattered but if you both had it...
Well I realy don't know.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

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4 posted 2008-01-30 04:58 PM

ahhh yes... there are three sides to a story... Yours, theirs and the truth... good poem...
Krysti

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5 posted 2008-02-03 08:33 PM

woah, this was a beautiful peice of work- it was incredible. isn't it interesting that the worst things in life make such beauty?

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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6 posted 2008-02-03 11:28 PM

Earl is right "Ignorance is bliss". But too bad your hurting. hope you get better. oh yeah ,almost forgot, great poem by the way lol

~Zach~

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