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*CaT*
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since 2007-12-07
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0 posted 2008-01-26 10:07 AM



He twisted my mind
And was sometimes unkind
He altered my soul
But didn't believe in my goal

He made me confused
But also amused
But right now
I feel 2 feet tall

He said he cheated
So I feel defeated
By someone I don't even know

He said it meant nothing
But I knew he was bluffing
He loves her
Like he never loved me

He made me upset
Full of remorse and regret
And made me feel sad
Almost drove me mad

He blocked out the pain
Appeared to stop the rain
But blocked out the sun
From the moment we'd begun

He's now out of my mind
I must of been blind
Not to see
What was right in my face

Boys:
can't live with them
can't make life without them


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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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since 2007-06-11
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1 posted 2008-01-26 01:07 PM


aww ya, been there done that- it was kinda rap-like. nice ryhmes.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2008-01-28 01:53 AM


verry nicee loved it
Krysti

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