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Bestroyal New Member
since 2006-10-04
Posts 3 |
sorry By Bestroyal some times sorry is just not enough some times sorry is just to little for the big mistake you have done you say sorry over and over but do you really mean it sorry is just a word just like any other words sorry dont mean a thing to me i dont care how much times you say it it means nothing to me and it never will |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hi Bestroyal, The only thing about this one that I find a little nerve racking would be some grammar errors and need of punctuation, no offence, I do not always get either of them right either. You might want to try a spell checker/grammar program to correct some of this, I find Microsoft Word helps some. Interesting idea in this poem and I admit I find it to be rather fascinating, as I have pondered the same kind of thoughts but with curse words instead, that is the idea that "sorry" is just another word. Thanks for sharing, I found this one to be an enjoyable read "I will love the light for it shows me the way, yet I will endure the darkness for it shows me the stars." - Og Mandino @-->--- |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
this poem had an interesting thought to it i liked it and i know you are pretty new so WELCOME TO PASSIONS  ...hunnie* A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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