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Teen Poetry #8

Living In a Storm of Life

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

0 posted 2008-01-25 05:30 PM

Sheltered by the storm ahead, falling towards the sun. Spinning in wreckless circles, looking only for one. The shadow that will save me, keep me close and warm, lies between us now, sheltered from the storm.

It lingers overhead, looking for a scream. The perfect one to keep it going, the one which belongs to me. Too frightened to move, holding back pain, lying beside you in tortured silence.

Coming towards us, swooping low. Life comes down on me in a murderuos form, taking me higher only so I will fall harder. It's compleatly dark with nowhere to run. I'll be traped in this maze of life, twisting and closing in on me. Traped by the reched storm that is tearing me apart, by the storm most people call life.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

1 posted 2008-01-25 07:34 PM

This has got to be your best write yet.. (yes i hv read ur others. i read every poem on here but don't have much time to comment..) It was great and very relatable,
Well Done,
Jess

XxForever.BrokenxX
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since 2008-01-20

Posts 891
Neverland

2 posted 2008-01-25 11:55 PM

lol thanx! u just lifted my mood! i wrote it today when i was supposed to be reading in one of my clases! :P

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

3 posted 2008-02-28 08:11 PM

That's really good!

Earl Robertson
Senior Member

since 2008-01-21

Posts 753
BC, Canada

4 posted 2008-02-28 08:40 PM

Very nice!

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