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XxForever.BrokenxX
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0 posted 2008-01-24 10:18 PM



Confusion in my heart, in my soul, in my mind.
Decending piece by piece, falling for life.
Confronted miniplulation, cursed by confusion. Free
falling through life, falling as if to be caught.

Shattered by what I love, murdered by what I feel.
Confusion is the culprit, making me pour tears.
Apathy taking over my mind, I go to where I feel alive.
I'm faling just incase someone trys to catch me, just incase someone cares.


FoReVeR.BrOkEn

[This message has been edited by XxForever.BrokenxX (01-25-2008 05:36 PM).]

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Earl Robertson
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since 2008-01-21
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1 posted 2008-01-24 11:56 PM


Oh.
Oh.

I...I don't...I don't know what to say.
So sad and yet strangly understandable. I can realy feel the emotions behind this peom.

"Be Strong and Always Remember what made you you." Earl

"Ooo!!! Ooo!! I know! I know! um...he he" Earl
(Yes I am crazy)

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2008-01-25 01:09 AM


ohhh I love this so beautifully written Emily.
Krysti

XxForever.BrokenxX
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3 posted 2008-01-25 05:34 PM


haha thanx guys, ur really cool

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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