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Heaven'sLilAngel
New Member

since 2008-01-23

Posts 6
Australia

0 posted 2008-01-23 03:32 AM

Hi Guys.. Well i'm new here but you've prob already gathered that.. i'm best mates with fellow poetess RevengeIsMine she and i have been besties since we were four.. we share the same name and we both love writing. So Revenge told me i had to join and share my poetry with her friends even though i'm not as good as her.. she's told me all about u guys and u all sound so amazing and unique... Anyway enjoy my first post!....

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A Place That I Call Home!!

Another dawn is rising,
Distant memories are now erased
Soon all will be forgotten
Now another day is faced

Straighten up that halo
Tidy up those wings
Prepare yourself for miracles
As a new day begins..

This little angel knows no boundaries
Her life consist's of none
Her miracles portray all evil
And bring hope to all but some

Her talent is her wisdom
Her wisdom is her song
So climb above her fluffy wings
And learn to right the wrong

Today this little angel
Found a home that she will keep
Here she’ll show the world her heart
She’ll laugh, she’ll love, and she’ll weep

So welcome her with open arms
Sing a song or shout with glee
Cause Heaven’s Little Angel has arrived
And she’s destined not too flee!

Clockwork_Orange
Senior Member

since 2007-03-23

Posts 620
Space Camp, IN

1 posted 2008-01-23 06:14 AM

very nice. you and jess have similar writing styles and rhythms, but there still absolutly original and beautiful. amazing write, really.

Heaven'sLilAngel
New Member

since 2008-01-23

Posts 6
Australia

2 posted 2008-01-23 06:55 AM

Hey.. thanks.. she taught me the fine art of poetry so thats where it comes from the uniqness i mean. thanks comment means lots..
Cheers, J

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2008-01-23 01:33 PM

wow Jess, I really loved this.. yes similar styles but not at all the same... Welcome To Passions

hope to read more soon
Krysti

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-02-01 10:49 AM

hello! im new here like you. this poem is really good. i like it alot.

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

5 posted 2008-02-01 05:40 PM

hey ya dove, or prehaps in your case angel would be more appropriate, it was so cute, these were my fave. lines

Her talent is her wisdom
Her wisdom is her song

very sweet, i love your innocence.

-Kate

and in the daylight i miss the nightmare- but deathly fear it in the dark of night

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