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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland 
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Lost I lie here sitting on my bed, staring after the life ahead. Trying to find where I belong, looking to see where I went worng. Can't seem to get things right, I'm always loosing in the fight. Why is the world in such a way that nobody hears what I say. I can't believe what they don't see, whats going on inside of me. I long to be someone else, to not be put back on the shelf. I try to tell them what I want, but how can I be what I'm not. All I wish is for them too know, I'm not just trying to put on a show. This is how I want to be, this is whats inside of me. Everything my heart contains causes other peoples pain, why can't the world just be, what my heart is ment to see. |
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Earl Robertson Senior Member
since 2008-01-21
Posts 753BC, Canada |
(sniff sniff) you very literaly have me tearing up here. Exellent. |
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shattered-smiles Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 247inside the shadows |
Awesome poem here. I especially like this part: Can't seem to get things right, I'm always loosing in the fight. Why is the world in such a way that nobody hears what I say. It just sort of got to me. Great write, hope to read more. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow Emily I loved this great write and Welcome To Passions hope to read more Krysti |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
GREAT JOB!! i know haw you feel about this. its very good |
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