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Relo
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0 posted 2008-01-17 05:38 PM



Layback on my chill
Snow brings down my optimism

Too Cool to be snowed in

Shovel all obstruction of my bliss
Relax in a cave not far
Observe stalagmites and stalagtites
Those who look up and others who look down
I'd like to stay humble on a middle ground
Leave the cave back into January's Winter

Too Numb to feel pain
Too Cool to stay still

Fight with snowballs on unfair terrain
Gather my weapon and release
Outnumbered so I retreat
To the land across the sheet
On the journey the ice cracks

Too Ignorant to swim
Too Strong to be so helpless
Too Cool to let them see

Pull myself up
Shivers down my spine
Dry off a little
Act like everything is just fine

Too Cool to be snowed in
Too Cool to stay still
Too Cool to let them see
Too Cool to be myself

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Relo
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 10

1 posted 2008-01-17 05:38 PM


By the way by ignorant...

I'm referring to myself cause I can't swim.

Yet this isn't a true story.

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2 posted 2008-01-18 12:44 PM


loved this
Krysti

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