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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Food Is tasetless in my mouth Depression Silences my shouts I'm becoming What I vowed I never would Someone unhappy Someone not good |
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wolf girl Member
since 2007-12-03
Posts 150washington, US |
it was short and sweet. i thought the ending wasnt quite strong enough. -jenna |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
sometimes I feel like this so I thought this was a great poem a little short but still good |
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