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pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06
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0 posted 2008-01-12 03:21 PM


Food
Is tasetless in my mouth
Depression
Silences my shouts
I'm becoming
What I vowed I never would
Someone unhappy
Someone not good

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wolf girl
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since 2007-12-03
Posts 150
washington, US
1 posted 2008-01-12 05:12 PM


it was short and sweet. i thought the ending wasnt quite strong enough.

-jenna

surf_painter
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since 2007-04-10
Posts 434
Canada
2 posted 2008-01-12 09:19 PM


sometimes I feel like this so I thought this was a great poem a little short but still good
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